Nao Yukawa

Roast my coming soon page 💀

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I’m doing my second product launch this Wednesday! If you can take a look at my coming soon page and roast it (i.e. unclear what my product does), I’ll fix it ASAP!
https://www.producthunt.com/products/lifestack

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Marc Andrew

Hey Nao,

Great job with Lifestack.

Here's a few pointers, focusing on the Hero (because we know how damn important that part is :)

  • The purple gradient is eye-catching but overwhelms the actual UI screenshots – consider creating more visual contrast so users can better see your product's features

  • Your headline is straightforward but could benefit from more emotional impact – what specific pain point are you solving? (Burnout? Productivity crashes?)

  • The app screenshots look functional but get lost against the background – they deserve more prominence as they're your product's main selling point

  • The floating 3D elements feel disconnected from your overall design language – tightening these visual elements would create a more premium impression


    I've helped several wellness/productivity apps refine their visual storytelling before launch, resulting in significantly better conversion rates. Happy to jump on a quick call to share some specific ideas that might help you stand out in the crowded productivity space.


Cheers
Marc

Nao Yukawa

@mrcndrw Woah these are all great points!!! I really appreciate you giving me this detailed feedback. I'll definitely try to incorporate it in the next version of our website.