Roast my coming soon page 💀
I’m doing my second product launch this Wednesday! If you can take a look at my coming soon page and roast it (i.e. unclear what my product does), I’ll fix it ASAP!
https://www.producthunt.com/products/lifestack
I’m doing my second product launch this Wednesday! If you can take a look at my coming soon page and roast it (i.e. unclear what my product does), I’ll fix it ASAP!
https://www.producthunt.com/products/lifestack
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Hey Framer
Hey Nao,
Great job with Lifestack.
Here's a few pointers, focusing on the Hero (because we know how damn important that part is :)
The purple gradient is eye-catching but overwhelms the actual UI screenshots – consider creating more visual contrast so users can better see your product's features
Your headline is straightforward but could benefit from more emotional impact – what specific pain point are you solving? (Burnout? Productivity crashes?)
The app screenshots look functional but get lost against the background – they deserve more prominence as they're your product's main selling point
The floating 3D elements feel disconnected from your overall design language – tightening these visual elements would create a more premium impression
I've helped several wellness/productivity apps refine their visual storytelling before launch, resulting in significantly better conversion rates. Happy to jump on a quick call to share some specific ideas that might help you stand out in the crowded productivity space.
Cheers
Marc
Lifestack
@mrcndrw Woah these are all great points!!! I really appreciate you giving me this detailed feedback. I'll definitely try to incorporate it in the next version of our website.