Roast my landing page- feedback needed 👀

Hello, here is my feedback of your product: (1) Consider making the headline more specific and concise to clearly communicate the purpose of the app. The headline does not make it clear what it represents. (2) Include more information about how the app works, its benefits, and more importantly how it differs from similar apps in the market to help visitors better understand the app's value proposition and encourage them to download it. (3) Where is the call to action? It should be visible and compelling. (4) To build credibility consider including testimonials or reviews from satisfied users to provide social proof.

I really like your clean design, the illustration design is also very clever, and it is very easy to understand even without text description. But it is true that each title has an Emoji, which makes me easily associate with Notion or a blog page instead of a landing page. And I didn't get the purpose of the 'Who is BeforeSunset for?" and The "Comming Soon" Section. For the “Who is BeforeSunset for?”, your description is talking about how to start. And actually the whole product is coming soon stage, why specifically indicate the feature still under developed? In my opinion it doesn't make sense to the users. This section should be added after the product is officially launched.

Spacing between the content below "See How it works" can be slightly reduces. In my opinion too much blank space. Everything else is great.

It's better to hide the fixed-top navigation and change the color pallet mainly the background color.

Congrats on building ver 2.0 of BeforeSunset Elif 🤗. I think the community has already added some valuable suggestions, I just want to add this one feedback about hero section: I love the design of your hero section but "Find a Mindful Productivity Tool for Your Team" sounds vague and doesn't give much clarity on what to expect. I feel you can work on something that is more simpler and direct.

What's the products USP?

Not sure if I'm your ICP, but here's how I'm perceiving the value as a non-user (hopefully parts of it is aligned to what you hope to communicate) 😊 BeforeSunset is a productivity tool that you can use individually or with a team. Here, you can set your intentions for the day, then stay focused on what's on your check-list. You can also share your status with your team in a non-disruptive way so they can stay in sync without losing focus. Their special touch is that they incorporate bite-sized mindfulness practices into the product - from how you set up your day, check in with your own mood, and hold space for activities that matter to your personal goals and wellbeing. Here are my assumptions on what your product can do vs not do: ✅ Provide time reports (actual time spent vs estimated, % of time spent of a project/tag) ✅ Each day is a new entry. You can't create a new more than one to-do list per day. ✅ The daily to-do document offers the following formats: headers, check list, # tags and @ mentions, insert timer. ✅ You see who is online at the same time, and you can filter the team feed based on the topics they are sharing an update on. ❌ This platform is not a knowledge base (e.g. Confluence/Notion) nor project management tool (e.g. Asana/AirTable/Monday.com). Thus, team members do their work in other tools. ❌ This is not a communication/chat tool (e.g. Slack). While team members can see the activity feed, to exchange comments and to communicate online, they have to maintain a separate communication tool. ❌ This is not a goal alignment tool. As in, this is not the place where goals/projects are broken down from the parent to children, grandchildren, etc. I also cannot see topics that are conflict or are dependent on each other. ❌ This is not a learning & development tool. While it allows users to consider personal wellness and pursuits, this is not a place for a team member and manager to conduct 1-1's and retros to see how the team member is progressing professionally and personally. ❌ This is not a calendar. While it does show how my day is spaced out, I will not replace my Google Calendar. I also don't expect the calendar view here to include event details like (description, location/video call link, attendees, etc). For me, I love the ethos of your product (like seriously ❤️). But I can't see myself habitually adopting this tool because of the following assumptions: ➡️ Limited integrations. I assume that set up is not easy and I will still rely on Google Calendar to keep track of events. I also assume that this tool will not pull status updates or channel updates from Slack to share in the activity feed. ➡️ Doesn't consolidate my tools. I will still need to use my existing tool stack for my work and even if integrations are offered, they won't be replaced by BeforeSun set. ➡️ The "Job to be done" is already completed with our current tools and processes. I love the idea of being done with work before sunset, but in terms of how this product will offer it, I don't think it will revolutionize my time allocation from what it currently is. However, I do think that this product would be resonate for the following groups because combination of time tracking and mindfulness is particularly tricky: ➡️ Agencies and freelancers. ➡️ Boutique consultants. ➡️ Student groups. Please take this with a grain of salt! Again, I might not be your ICP, but hopefully this helps in some way.

It’s looking great @elifduran ! One idea—it would be SO cool if the checkbox in the hero section was clickable. That was my first reaction and click on the page. I may also suggest moving the waiting list signup box higher on the page, maybe even just after the hero section.

Great work do I think you should follow most of the advice shared by others actually my visual couldn't allow me to see what space or other if it is needed for your London but if I may ask what to do you use for the build up thanks

Missing social proof at the top. You for sure have something better than Product Hunt to showcase: leverage it.

On mobile the max width of the content is too little. Increase it, since the lines consist in just 4/5 words

Blog posts definitely take up too much space for a homepage. There are better ways to use that real estate. Features, clients list, awards, use cases, pain points solved, case study, stats… blog post should not be one of the main part of the homepage. Just use a section that send to the blog for those who want to read

In the menu there isn’t a link for the pricing page. It’s usually the second most visited page of a SaaS website, so take advantage of it