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Guta Raspanti

Roast my landing page 🔥

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I've reached a significant milestone in this transition to the life of an indie hacker: I've completed my first landing page 😱. I'm very happy! https://www.oniva.io/ Can you suggest improvements? Feel free to be brutally honest. I can take the criticism. 😉

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Konok Nazmul
1. Watch out for hero text, heading, and subheading text size. I think it's very small and hard to draw attention to. 2. Fix the design alignment
Hanna from Niceboard
Looks great! Would change the main CTA to be 1. bigger and 2. lead to a demo/how it works/try for free. Most people visiting your site aren't ready to get started immediately. They likely first want to see how it works and be assured that it's free. I think I would have 2 CTA's similar to those: Try for free/Start for free & See demo/how it works