I just made my first promotional video for a product: roast me!

@tatyanesoro wow, Tatyane, your feedback is great!! Thank you so much for taking the time, it really helps!!! I agree with everything you’ve said, and we’ll definitely take it into account in our next iteration! Thanks again, and please do support us by clicking the notify button if you think Touring should make it into the real world 😇

@gabriele_mazzola Cool product! Let's support each other. Does the product support multiple language?

@derrick_law The product itself will support ANY language. This is because it relies on generative AI and TTS to produce audio content, so we're not limited to any specific language!

@derrick_law Just updated the copy of the teaser to convey the message immediately, thank you for the useful comment!

@dailyfitnessai Hi, thanks for the feedback! No, we didn't film the footage. We used stock videos that you can use by paying a subscription to the marketplace. I agree the video might be a bit long, but our goal was to stay within the minute. If you had to cut it down, what would you sacrifice? perhaps we could edit and also have a short version. Thanks again for the feedback!

@gabriele_mazzola Maybe it feels long because it is abit monotonous, maybe add some subtitles and effects?

@dailyfitnessai @gabriele_mazzola Most social media site posts you'll want to cut this down to 15-30 seconds.. some will limit 15sec

@ax3com definitely agree, this was not meant for social media, but we are thinking about editing also a short version of it!

@dariana_glava Hi Dariana, thank you so much for the feedback! The idea for this video was to give the general idea of what Touring does (walk around and get real-time personalized explanations of what is around you) without diving too much into details, because it was meant to be catchy. We're actually in the process of crafting a more technical video that explains all the features that are listed in the landing page (touringapp.eu) as well, like you suggested! Please, if you find it interesting, make sure to hit the "notify" button in the teaser, so you'll be notified in a few weeks about the release of the playground online that will let you try out all the features without moving from home! I will definitely follow your profile and the "tom" product, and will support you on your launch!

@annitahzl Hi Annitah, thank you so much for the feedback! Great tip for the logo, you're right! I'll definitely change that! And great that you noticed the effect of the headphones! I actually put quite some time into finding the right effect (reverse bass drop) and to time it with the video, I was inspired by the effects that Nolan uses in his incredible movies! Thank you so much for the valuable feedback, and make sure to hit the "notify" button if you think Touring might be interesting for you, I hope so :P

@gabriele_mazzola Yeah - this "Nolan effect" really makes the video stand out. I hit the "notify" button 👌

@jahnmary_diaz Hi! thank you so much for the feedback! Our goal was to be within the minute, but I understand it might feel a little long, time is precious these days :P Looking at the videos, a few comments: - I like the pace, it conveys the message immediately and it goes to the point - Is it an AI-generated voice? In my opinion, always worth to pay a voice over artist (we did with Fiverr, and it's very cheap... something like 20 dollars for 150 words) because I tend to lose interest when I watch a video with an AI voice. Anyway, if you want to keep the ai voice, I found the best tool to be lovo.ai (they have a free plan, perhaps you might want to try it out) - I like the colors, and funny how similar our two color palettes are :D I guess it's good we're not going to be competitors haha :P - perhaps it's just missing a few seconds explaining how the product actually works Hope these comments help! And also, I'd be super happy if you hit the "notify" button on our teaser page, but only if you are interested in Touring and want to know when you can actually try it out! (it will be just a couple of weeks!)

@gabriele_mazzola thank you so much for your feed back, and yes we are using ai voices this was a choice of my boss we're trying to do the campaing using ai as much as possible and trying to invest the less amount of money possible, I'll try lovo.ai (thank you for that) and getting back to your video even time is precious, people loose atention pretty fast it seems that we have to send the menssage in the shot time possible otherwise we loose the attention, I'll love to try touring but I don't travel much :(

@leon_novacki Hi Leon! Thank you so much for the valuable feedback, it really means a lot for us! I agree with you on the fact the she is smiling a bit too much (like also people in cocacola ads do, sometimes haha) but I've searched for hours and hours for stock footage that could fit better and this was the best I found :( Thank you again!

@tornike_tsiramua1 definitely! Feel free to add me and I’ll accept the connection tomorrow (it’s late evening in Italy and I am about to log off haha). My linkedin is in my PH profile!

@studio_rsd thank you SO much for the constructive feedback. Happy to hear that it got you curious! I was thinking of adding at the end (when the Touring logo comes out on a black screen) some mockup of the app in the background and something like “find out more and try it at touringapp.eu “ Do you think is a good idea?

@gabriele_mazzola Personally would lean towards not in a teaser video – unless the app's UI, & animation for the video looks catchy (totally subjective). The current storytell promise of AI tourguide, ending with a logo (+ URL, App/Play Store download whatnot) leaves the possibilities to the viewers imagination.

@ax3com definitely something we might want to look at, can you point us towards your product?

@sentry_co thanks for the feedback! Any suggestion on a catchy hook?

@gabriele_mazzola Ask and you shall receive: "Are you tired of the hassle of planning your travel itinerary? Touring is here to revolutionize the way we travel!"