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Sebastian Janus - derStartupCFO

Hey Guys, I am launching next week and would like to get some feedback on the product-page:

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As I am still new to PH I would like to get some feedback to my product page. Are there things I could improve before the launch? Every feedback is highly appreciated 🔥 Here is the link: https://www.producthunt.com/prod...

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Ali Shishehgar
Nice! looking forward to the launch!
Emily Rasenecker
Hi Sebastian! Great page! Just some minor details that I stumbled upon: The page hero feels too busy. The circles grab too much attention as it takes my mind away from whats really important: The header. Don't be afraid of white space - there is a lot of power in simplicity. And I got confused with the pitch deck OS bundle as the catchphrases seem to have a different product picture in the bundle than individually. I would recommend to stick to the same image to avoid confusion ;)
Vanessa Hajduga
Make sure your product description is easy to understand and highlights the unique features and benefits of your product. Use bullet points to break up the text and make it easier to read. I hope this tip help you improve your product page and achieve a successful launch. Good luck!
Karthik Tatikonda
Product page looks good Sebastian My suggestions: 1. Have 4 images - it will increase the chances of ranking in top3 2. Screenshots are not clear in the product images All the best for the launch 🎉
Sebastian Janus - derStartupCFO
@karthik_tatikonda @hosseinyazdi Okay thank you for your feedback what would you prefer to see in the screenshots?
Aditi Shah
Hey Sebastian, This looks like a great idea! Couple of quick thoughts: 1. The copy seems a bit too wordy in a few sections, you can try making it a bit more concise. 2. Adding a video of the entire worflow would make it easier to interpret and correlate. We're also launching PATR in the coming weeks, would love to have your support!
Sebastian Janus - derStartupCFO
@aditi13shah Ill get notified as soon as you launch! Recording a video might be a bit late for now but Ill definitely set it as a task for my next launch
Norman Lammers
Hi Sebastian, perhaps the key visuals could be a bit bolder. Love your stuff BTW. Cheers
LisaKim
Hi, Sebastian! I launched a hyper-personalized AI recommendation app today btw :) Your product page is overall great, pitches are always incredibly difficult, especially for workers like me whose native language is not English. I'm excited for Pitch Deck Catch Phrases! I think maybe the name of your product is a little bit of a mouthful haha.
Mehdi Rifai
Great page! Here are some minor details to fix: - the image on "Database of catch phrases slide" looks blurry - I think it's missing a catchphrase example and how it can fit in a deck for example to give an idea of what type of content to expect. Best of luck!
Hossein Yazdi
Is your website in Deutch or it appeared only to me? If it's in Deutch for everyone, I'll suggest adding an English version as well.
Manab Boruah
Launching soon!
Hi @derstartupcfo , the page looks good. The first image lacks actionability. I was not able to clearly see what was highlighted. May be work on that again? All the best for your launch.
Zain Sheikh
I think, your coming soon page image needs to be pixel-perfect. Its a bit blurry and nobody has time to read everything in detail. So list limited categories in their. I love the tag line though.