Roast my product page?

A loom video is okay to explain the product but it usually looses traction around costumers who are not full invested into the your product from other material. a good short video intro made with motion design that can explain the problem and highlight the solution is essential.

Hey Dan, thanks for asking (I'm stealing this approach for my launch! ). had a quick look - it's kind of really hard to get what the product does quickly. I - scrolled thru, - read a lot of text - clicked thru to your site and still I don't really get a clear idea of what your product does. 'Get back to the work that matters.' doesn't tell me anything about the product. the list of features doesn't add up to a coherent pic of what the product will help me with. happy to look at v2 if you decide to update the page b4 the launch. Tania

Would love to see a quick demo or GIF at the top. A static image is fine, but an animation showing how it works would make a huge difference.

I see the phrase "Instead of worrying about whether they'll run out of money, founders can get back to doing what they do best." mentioned in the desc, this implies that without TimeFront, founders are at risk of financial ruin??. I believe its a negative approach that might not resonate well. Positive reinforcement is usually works better i guess.

I'd add a section on why this is different from other similar tools. Right now, I get what it does, but I'm not totally sure why I'd pick this over something else.

Your first comment needs a lot of improvement.