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@tszhoi_19 Thanks for your kind words, mate! I'll follow your advice and will implement the pop up for the video to keep people on the same page.

@lior_galante_cohen I think its a great landing page. Few suggestions 1. For the gif, it might be helpful to show everything sequentially as in show Monica's profile first and then the conversation suggestions. This is primarily because the real estate is so limited 2. Don't have an answer on how to solve it but in the template reading the text in the background image is hard, maybe a different color schema or typography can work

@lior_galante_cohen Hey Lior! Thanks for replying. 1. It auto shows the bottom of the page which I have to scroll up to see what is it. Should show the top of the page instead 2. A Textual background with black overlay is confusing, user won't know where should they look at in the first glance. A linear flow would be better. Background stays graphic is easier for people to focus on your text. 3. The one-liner uses a lot of vague words which I don't get who is your TA and what Amy "actually" do. Use example or concise keywords. "Get to know who you're gonna meet better" might be an easily understandable scenario. People don't need to know what you do, people need to know what value you brings them. Hope this helps and good luck!!

@tszhoi_19 Regarding (3), is this one-liner better in your opinion: "Amy saves you valuable time in meeting preparation and helps you personalize your pitch, by providing you with actionable insights and all the must-know information about people you're meeting with."?

@lior_galante_cohen How about....? "Amy gives you all the information you need to know about the person you're meeting. Stay well-prepared with yourself and your pitch." btw if you like this, help me by upvoting the discussion and let more people benefits from it!

@tszhoi_19 Super helpful, and a lot of food for thought! Thank you!

@germa Looks awesome! Very clear, very straightforward, good strong CTA and great to use the Slack logo there. I got a slight UI bug (on chrome, laptop) - when I scroll about half way down the header switches to white.

@germa very neat landing page. I guess one thing that was bit unclear was Engage your crowd. It was not exactly evident what crowd meant.

Hey @germa ! Thanks for replying. 1. Overall a very nice landing page. 2. Also great feedback from Archisman about "crowd". Business owner/ don't seek their teammates as crowd I would say. 3. The key visual can be improved. Right now only the "survey" component makes senses to me. "Thank you" message doesn't explain a lot in this scenario. The circle graph is almost meaningless unless I scroll down to the data part. 4. Last one, quite personal from me but I would avoid using #000000 Black with other colourful graphic you are using. Try a bit light in black or pick another key colour for CTA button which could bend it nicely with yellow background. (notice your H1 colour is different from H2 tho haha) Thanks for letting me comment on it! Good work!!

@tszhoi_19 thanks for the feedback mate!

Heyyyyyyy @shruti_vrm 1. If you are targeting students, be bold and straightforward is the best way. Slogan like "We help you plan your career" could works better than "empowering", "transforming". Use words that people speak everyday. 2. Graphic style + colour doesn't matched between different parts. 3. Duplication of points: knowing personality pretty = understand myself better. A bit too wordy too. 4. Some buttons/graphic slide in animations are too extra. CTA should be bigger and use a high contrast colour (white on light blue doesn't work). 5. Sometimes put a bit of demo, or question to get people engage esp it is a test. Pop up the first question and let people click on it instead of reading the whole thing. Action > info. Hope this helps! All the best to the project.

@tszhoi_19 This is amazing! All of these feedbacks are darn actionable! Thankyou so much for taking out time to review it. Once worked, I'll definitely share the LP with you again!!

@shruti_vrm Glad that I helped! Keep up the work!!

@product_at_producthunt ❤️ the rotating catch phrases. Is the next 🦄 here?

@product_at_producthunt Oh god, I didn't expect this and I wouldn't dare to put comment on the Mighty PH. But there're some minor stuff I did notice. 1. The blue filter "featured" button is too eye-catchy (the only blue on the page and its sharp blue) Off-focus to user from project. 2. Love the borderless design, trendy and clean. I would make the upvote button pop when hover (colour change) instead of an orange overlay to encourage higher conversation on CTA:upvote. 3. The hidden open a new tab button next to project name is not quite intuitive. It feels like a share button turns out just open on new tab. A tool tip when over might works more seamlessly in this case. 4. Removed the ranking on the outside, also removing the competitive vibe among project. Good initiative but people might be quite sad if they're outside of 5th anw. 5. Rainbow colour skeleton loading, just lovely isn't it? Those are my little 2cents that doesn't even deserved. PH has been a great place for startup and builders! Thanks a lot for this!

@keren_brickman heres a link to our app as well (we're free!) would love any copy feedback: app.gotolstoy.com

@keren_brickman Sorry I missed your comments! Hope it is not too late for this as well! Awesome Product, even more awesome landing page. It is almost perfectttt. I think animation is a bit too extra for those in the bottom of the page (cause people scroll faster and faster after first two flows) For content-wise, I struggle a bit to understand "face-to-face convo" when the demo video is a button-clicking interaction. For quite a sec, I was thinking so is this also video call as well (?) All the best to your work! Also great to see you hanging around in PH community!

@price2spy Looking forward to the tool. I think one thing you can do differently is maybe highlight the benefits of bot protection on the top fold itself. Ofcourse you don't need that if most of the audience who land on your page are already well aware of it in which the focus can be on how your tool is the best out there

@price2spy you might need a more fancy design if you try to sell to small startup or B2C user. (Proper revamp needed) But if it works for B2B then it is not the first thing you need to do for the project!

@tszhoi_19 Thanks for the feedback! Actually got a couple of interesting changes in the works currently!

@archisman_das Thanks for your suggestion, I'll definitely consider it!

@nik_hazell Hey! Thanks for replying. Overall a very decent landing page. Great display of video demo. Nice use of colour and contrast. Few points I would love to add on: 1. The Tagline is a bit plain, doesn't make a "Aha-ha" moment for user. Instead explain what are you in phase, you could try with what value you bringing to user or the actual use case. Such as "Test out your Ad video", "Predict how your ad will perform". Users are not investors, they don't get buzz word like AI-powered. 2. First sentence about "coming the first time" basically not useful for first time comer. It works for big brand when they have deep branding and community. Simply saying How it works (second sentence) is perfect. Less is more. 3. Overall quite wordy is some part. Used thin font to avoid the heaviness but still I skipped some parts because it is just too long. Hope this help! All the best.

@tszhoi_19 Thanks! Super helpful - will chat through with our team today :)

@akiracloud Love the tagline and animations. High-res image will be better in showing off your product. Love the interaction graph display as well!!

@akiracloud Easy to understand what the product is. Great work with explanation.

@archisman_das 1. Love the tagline works well with the visual 2. I think fin-tech product can't be too design/ trendy. A great barrier of product like this is trustworthy. Try to take reference of bank might be better way to go than take reference from other B2C app. (pictures works well I think) Hope it helps! All the best.

@tmartchek HD image + Fontsize! Two important things you can do!

@tszhoi_19 thank you! I’ll get right on those!

@jeet_bhanushali Congrats on ranking top on your launch! (Any tips? aha) 1. Very nice landing page with cool dark mode 2. Interactive component also easy try out is a winner 3. Key image could be more high-res, now a bit blurry 4. I found having CTA on every section a bit packed and distracted. (Esp the second flow with " Download High..." that section is a bit redundant) Would be great to go straight to the interactive drag effect. Overall very decent and looking forward to the creative profile element!

@primoz_erjavec viewing it on laptop. I would get rid of the hamburger button. Better to have the menu options visible. The buttons for the products you're selling is inconspicuous. Text over video is a little annyoing. Hope this helps!

@maen_haq thanks;)

@rupjyoti_nath i think its a bit to cluttered. Less is more. Too much text with very little separation. I would suggest adding separate pages for pricing etc. Focus on the main message on the main landing page.

@maen_haq Thank you.

@stephi I like it. It's clean, the message is clear, and the colors are great. The "Made with love in Berlin" is a nice touch so even minuscule details are noticeable.

@maen_haq Thanks! You made my day :)

@dan__cleary Hey Dan, great landing page! However, I do find it not persuasive enough to sell your product! Understanding it is a product requires whole team effort (between founders, QA, tech, design). You should highlight how easy it can get onboard, or else I would think it is too annoying to setup stuff all over again. I think you could take a lot of reference from Linear's landing page. btw Great product, love it. Hope to hear more from you some day!

@tszhoi_19 Thanks so much for the feedback Lee, I really appreciate it. If you ever need any feedback or anything feel free to reach out!

Hey @mishra_mayank, thanks for replying. 1. Love the poppins idea, great use case. 2. Everything on the landing page is too big because it is not a responsive web(?), feel too overwhelming with all the big font and component. EVERYTHINGISTOOPACKEDLIKETHIS 3. Overall need to improve on information hierarchy and make better decision on layout, fontsize, fontweight. Learn how to use white space like @imtiyaz922 's https://curatora.io! Great work on the product for real, easy to understand, (Sad, Im a non-TA tho not using Slack anymore) Good luck!!!

@jdgusz Heyy, thanks for replying! 1. Perfect copywriting, but lack of a key visual in the first flow. Adding product demo or picture of people using the product would make a decent first glance for user. 2. Gradient colour on button is a bit extra. A normal use of high contrast colour is fine. Less is more. 3. Personal opinion but I feel like the purple colour can finetune a bit. Now a bit too saturated and too bright.

@madeline_russell Very decent work and polish design on the landing (ofcuz it is your business haha) Those animated slide in are fine to perfect. But one comment is about the size when it is on laptop full window, It will hide the CTA in the first flow. However when the window width is smaller(ard 800px I guess), the overall sizing is better. Also the go to UXUI project button in the bottom of the landing doesn't work

@joannakurylo your own landing is better than the ship one!! Nice use of colour. But the 1, 2, 3 steps order is wrong when it's in two columns. Put the CTA centre also helps conversion!

@tszhoi_19 Thank you for your feedback!! Do you think there's any added benefit to having a ship landing page and a main landing page? or should I just stick with mine that I originally built (BTW I built mine using Typedream )

@joannakurylo I think having your main one is more than enough! Stick with one avoid confusion and better for you to track data.