Dan Gower

Roast my product page?

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Hi everyone! I'm planning to have my first launch in a couple of weeks, and I'd appreciate your feedback. Here's a link to my product page: https://www.producthunt.com/posts/timefront What can I do to make this page better? I'm especially interested in what I can do to gain followers and get more upvotes on the day of launch!

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thomas jack
Would love to see a quick demo or GIF at the top. A static image is fine, but an animation showing how it works would make a huge difference.
Tania Bell
Hey Dan, thanks for asking (I'm stealing this approach for my launch! ). had a quick look - it's kind of really hard to get what the product does quickly. I - scrolled thru, - read a lot of text - clicked thru to your site and still I don't really get a clear idea of what your product does. 'Get back to the work that matters.' doesn't tell me anything about the product. the list of features doesn't add up to a coherent pic of what the product will help me with. happy to look at v2 if you decide to update the page b4 the launch. Tania