Is my landing page trash? Please be honest!
PBLZ : Super simple work tracker app
https://pblz.work/home/index.html
I created a simple landing page for this project.
I did everything myself except for the hosting, using only a cursor. Since I'm a designer without much coding experience, I feel like there are some awkward elements.
Can you give me some candid feedback on what's lacking in my website, including development, marketing, SEO, and design? If there are critical issues, I’d like to fix them (even though the 100% launch might be delayed...).
Let's show the power of the PH community.
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Hey @imbud1980, i've the same feeling about your landing page, i don’t understand what your app does.
But in general the landing pages looks fine, the background animation is a Plus, but the purpose of a landing page is attract and engaging users, so your have a bit of room to do it.
try to use manus.im to validate your landing page, he’ll give you a lot insights to improve, like Layout, SEO etc...
Keep going mate!
@pradomaker I'm glad we have a common opinion.
I'll reflect the changes and let you know; can I ask you once more?
Hey @imbud1980
here's a lit bit more quick feedback:
Add a clear subtitle explaining your value proposition - e.g "Track work time with a tap, balance life better"
Highlight benefits with icons instead of just text descriptions
Include user testimonials to build trust
Add more CTAs throughout the page, not just in the header
Add Google Play button or waitlist for Android users
Optimize images for mobile and improve SEO with proper heading structure
Loving the app for tracking my hours - simple yet effective! Let me know if you need more details.
@pradomaker
I plan to make some immediate revisions based on your feedback.
Thank you for reorganizing it.
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Additional) Unfortunately, this product will only be available on iOS.
@imbud1980 @pradomaker I like the background animation too! But like others said, it's unclear what the app does. Maybe add a short video explaining it? Also, check out usemanus.im as Filipe suggested. Can't wait to see the improvements!
@pradomaker @fred_davis5 I'm glad to hear there are some good parts! It's shocking that I didn't know what the app was before downloading it, but that's my mistake. Have you had a chance to download it? If you try it out, could you please share your thoughts on the app?
@pradomaker @catt_marroll @eliqa @fred_davis5
Hello! I've made a few revisions based on your feedback.
What do you think? It's much better now, right?
1. Replaced the title message with the app description.
2. Changed the descriptions of each menu to be more specific.
3. Added a short video to explain what the service is.
4. Made the buttons more visible.
https://pblz.work/home/index.html
You can already download it, but the official PH launch is just around the corner.
We're in the QA phase and still making adjustments ;-) Can I also look forward to your thoughts on the app?
https://apps.apple.com/us/app/pblz-super-simple-work-tracker/id6738460309
Purposeful Poop
nice! yeah this does look a lot more clean. nice work on the iterations!
Purposeful Poop
this is super low contrast
i dont really understand what your app does after staring at it for a while. what is total number of cities worked? (in your hero screen shot).
i would need alot more context on what your app actually does and what problem it solves for me before i would consider downloading.
congrats on shipping though! almost always the hardest part :)
@catt_marroll That's a good point! Let's fix it! Thank you so much for the feedback!
Official launch in PH today!
Thanks to you, it feels like we have a better product. Thank you once again.