steve beyatte

đŸ”„ Community Tagline Roast - Let's fix some taglines

Think your product’s one-liner is good? Let’s find out.

Post your product and your tagline below and get real feedback from fellow makers—does it land, confuse, or completely miss?

Use this format when giving feedback to others:

  • First thoughts: What do you think the product is?

  • (1-5) How likely are you to try it based on the tagline alone? Why or why not? 5 = extremely likely, 1 = not interested.

  • How clear is it? (do you feel you understand what the product does and what problem it's solving?)

  • How can it be improved?

Drop yours. Roast your fellow makers. Let’s make our taglines better 👇

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Blake  Band

https://www.producthunt.com/p/i-give-cool-gifts/i-give-cool-gifts-2

I Give Cool Gifts: The ultimate destination for gift-giving inspiration

igivecoolgifts.com

Uri Bram

@blake_band 

> First thoughts: What do you think the product is?

I'm guessing a directory / website with various gift ideas on it, maybe searchable or organized by categories

> (1-5) How likely are you to try it based on the tagline alone? Why or why not?

probably 2 -- it's actually a service I'm interested in in general, but the tagline doesn't pull me in -- why is this the ultimate destination for gift-giving? Feels like a hollow claim right now

> How clear is it? (do you feel you understand what the product does and what problem it's solving?)

Ha -- that depends if I'm right about what it is / does! But yeah seems relatively clear in theory.

> How can it be improved?

I guess I just want to know what makes these gift recommendations trustworthy and valuable. "Impartial gift recs with no affiliate fees," "gift recs sourced from over 1 million reddit comments," "hand-curated gifts with no drop-shipping allowed", whatever your special source is that explains why users should trust your recs over others -- basically you're competing with me googling "gift recommendations for [12 year olds who like bicycles]," and while that's a low bar to clear I need a reason before I'll trust a new website to fill that niche

steve beyatte

@blake_band 

  • Clarity: yes it's clear

  • Would I use it: no, I'm not a gifter

  • How can it be improved: what about something unique/compelling to make this more than just gift inspo

Max

Hey,

New tagline idea → Build and sell complete knowledge products — AI, design, dev.

What do you think?

https://www.producthunt.com/products/tapflow

steve beyatte

@hewmax 

  • Clarity: Yes with the exception that I don't know what a knowledge product is. My assumption is that this means courses?

  • Would I use it: No but I am not the market

  • Suggestions for improvements: are there knowledge products that aren't courses? If so, could you add those in instead of using the word 'knowledge product'? Knowledge product makes me think IQ tests.

Max

Thanks,@steveb â€” fair point.

Not just courses.

Think guides, playbooks, workflows, templates, frameworks — structured knowledge packaged so others can use (and pay for).

Max

@steveb 

Build and sell guides, playbooks, and workflows for AI, design, dev?

steve beyatte

@hewmax Makes way more sense to me!

Rajiv Ayyangar

@hewmax I'm a 2/5, mostly for clarity. My brain broke when I read "complete knowledge products" - I have no idea what that means. After reading your website, I feel pretty strongly you need to use "courses" in your tagline, otherwise, most people will be confused.

Some ideas:

  • Turn your knowledge into premium online courses

  • Turn your knowledge into courses, guides, and templates

Max

Thanks,@rajiv_ayyangar — tagline now:

Build and sell guides, playbooks, and workflows for AI, design, dev

Samuel Anozie
Because static boilerplates are 2000 & late đŸ˜Ș www.stackhouse.sh
steve beyatte

@ifeanyi_sa I get what is is and I like the idea and would use it if I wasn't allergic to all the js frameworks. Nice work!

How does it make money?

Samuel Anozie
@steveb i’m using a credit based system! 1 credit = 1 project download đŸ‘ŒđŸŸ Also, if there’s a js framework you’re not allergic to, I’ll add it 👀
Jean Willame

Hey here's our tagline :

"Turn your processes into clear, visual guides in minutes."

Please roast me ! :)

https://www.process-flow.io/

steve beyatte

@jean_willame 

  • Clarity: yes, feels clear that this is a visual documentation aide

  • Would I use it: no, but I'm not the target market though I feel like I would opt for the tool where my docs already are (Notion, Workspace, Asana, etc.) as I'd get a lot more tooling and I've never needed more visual guides. Can I put your flows inside existing tools?

  • Ways to improve: The website is well done. It was unclear to me if this actually "does" the workflow. The screenshots on the site made me think of Zapier but I had to think for a second to understand that this was just a visual helper.

Jean Willame

@steveb Thanks for the honest feedback ! 🙂

Yep, you can embed it on Notion for example, and any other tool that authorize embeds ! Our point is to come on top of documentation tools like Notion, but that's interesting you didn't catch it on the landing page, that means we need to clarify.

Yes that makes sense since our inspiration came from tools like Zapier and n8n, it looks similar. I don't really know how to make a clear differentiation without saying WE ARE NOT DOING AUTOMATION (yet) ahah, what would you change or add in order to make it crystal clear that it's not an automation tool?

Nika

If possible, explain also what you expect (expected behaviour) from the product. This taught me one developer from an Android app company, and it immensely helped them to improve the app. (Because I was specific and outlined what I want as potential customer.)

Tori Seidenstein

I'd love people's input!

Name: Tadata (tadata.com)

Tagline: "MCP-as-a-service"

We haven't launched on ProductHunt yet, but will soon.

Ömer Faruk BULUT

We know we are not the best at promoting the technique so any comments and criticisms are welcome:
https://www.producthunt.com/products/void-zero-knowledge-proof-nocby/

Uri Bram

@omer_faruk_bulut2 can you post the product and the tagline here?

Ömer Faruk BULUT

@uri_bram1 Ahh sorry, my bad.

The "black" images found on zeroknowledgeproof.net are images that have data stored in them by our VOID algorithm, in other words, the product is actually a data storage technique and those images are the product that emerges as a result of the technique.


"They can't hack, if they can't see"

Uri Bram

@omer_faruk_bulut2 for sure!

First thoughts: What do you think the product is?

So I'm not entirely clear, to be honest -- the name ZeroKnowledgeProof makes me think/assume it's some kind of cryptography product involving zero knowledge proofs! The tagline doesn't convey much more to me.

(1-5) How likely are you to try it based on the tagline alone? Why or why not? 5 = extremely likely, 1 = not interested.

1 -- I'm probably not the audience for this though, assume it's some kind of b2b product with a specific target audience in mind? (I'm not going to check the website yet because I feel like that violates the spirit of the game here!)

How clear is it? (do you feel you understand what the product does and what problem it's solving?)

Not clear to me at least!

How can it be improved?

I think just knowing who the customer is for this / what you're trying to "sell" would be super helpful, then I could have clearer ideas of a tagline that would convey the right idea / appeal to the right audience. Seems like a product that will be hard to fully explain in a short tagline, but the tagline could at least be a good batsignal to appeal to the kind of customer the product is designed for.

Ömer Faruk BULUT

@uri_bram1 Hey Uri, thanks for sharing your thoughts! We'll definitely take your words into consideration for future promotions/launches.

Milan Surelia

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