Manu Goel

"Don't Sell. Solve Problems" -- Need feedback on our tagline

MarketFit is launching soon.

I thought what would be a better forum than PH to get some feedback on our tagline.

We are evaluating 2 options but open to others too.

1) "Don't Sell. Solve Problems"

2) "Sales AI: Don't Sell. Solve Problems"

3) (think of something other tagline)

Much appreciate if you could give a feedback by mentioning 1,2,3 and maybe suggest a tagline if 3...we would be super grateful.

For quick reference: https://www.producthunt.com/products/marketfit

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Sanooj Surendranath
  1. Serve, don't sell.

  2. Sales AI: Solutions over sales.

Manu Goel
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@sanoojs thanks!

@manu_goel2 Smarter selling starts with solving.

Manu Goel
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@ninaaaa0913 👍thanks
Olga Shiryaeva

I'd go with Option 2 since "Sales AI" immediately clarifies what type of tool this is.

A couple of suggestions on the current copy:

  • "Sales guys" could be more inclusive - consider "sales teams" or "sales professionals" instead.

  • The phrase "Does only what matters most to [sales professionals]" doesn't clearly communicate what the product actually does. I can see it's sales-related, but the specific problem it solves isn't obvious from the description.

Manu Goel
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@olga_shiryaeva1 thanks a lot for your suggestions. Somehow I thought (from what I see around ) that guys is now used as a common term but seems I am wrong. I will surely correct that and the second point too. Your feedback is much appreciated. Thanks a lot
Olga Shiryaeva

@manu_goel2Glad it was helpful! You're partially right about the "guys" comment - it has become more casual. I just think it's always safer to use inclusive language in marketing copy since you never know who's reading and what their experiences are. Thanks for being so open to feedback!

Elly
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Could you tell me a little more about your product? I don't have a good idea of what the product is from the tagline~.

Manu Goel
Launching soon!

@elly_sp Sure Elly. Please check here https://www.producthunt.com/products/marketfit or at our website ... marketfit.mgimpacts.com Thanks for reaching out.