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Tell me your marketing problem and I will provide the honest feedback
So, I have been in marketing field for almost 5 years now and I have an experience in
- copywriting
- marketing strategies
- PPC ads
- SEO
- Analytics
- Amazon marketplace ads
- Instagram marketing &
- Shopify.
I love to solve marketing problems and use storytelling & strategies to help propel growth.
Drop your marketing issue and I will try my best to solve it. Maybe do the copywriting as well.
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Jing Hu
Hi Lalit, thanks for offering! I'd love to have your feedback: https://www.ahgain.co.uk/
and https://www.instagram.com/behapp...
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@jinghu I know you're doing something new in the field of dating but I don't get it.
- Maybe change the copywriting and emphasise on the pain point in one line and explain how you solve that in next line.
- Use an image or illustration for retention. No one likes to read text. The second paragraph can be summarised in
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@lastyprsfe Thank you for registered and the honest feedback. It does seem like the copy is really bad and didn't deliver the idea. We are helping couples to last instead of matching single people.
@jinghu Yes. Now that sounds better.
Something like " One night stands are overrated. Meeting someone again is underrated"
This is something random I suggested but something in that range would work well"
I have a pretty unique product that is really helpful for houseplant owners, but lordy I have struggled with digital advertising and all that goes with it. I would love any advice you might have. My product: !https://daphnesbotanicals.com/co...
@austin_peters Not a plants guy but most of my friends face the problem you're solving with this.
Boil it down to the pain point.
- Make a video about it in works and how it indicates.
- Run that on instagram targeting your user persona.
Will take 1 week but you'll nail it for sure.
And if you can also work with fonts and main page of website to improve it, the landing page impression would certainly do wonders.
@lastyprsfe thanks that's super helpful. We'll do that video. Regarding the main page and/or fonts, any examples you can show that you like? Thanks again.
Hey Lalit, thank you critique this website mentioned below. Looking forward to your feedback: https://www.consulting.startupan...
@abhinav_unnam1 Hey Abhinav,
The idea behind the website is great and since I am interested in data, I get it.
But as a normal user
- Change the headline on front page.
- Make font and icon small to get more accommodated and aesthetic feel.
- Also, the rounded buttons have too much space.
IN short, think from the user perspective, not a data guy.