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Carsten Pleiser

Share your upcoming product's tagline and get feedback what you can improve?

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When you launch on PH, you need to describe what your product does in under 60 characters. Write down your tagline below and get feedback. Will it grab people's attention? Does it work? Will it stick? You can use https://charactercounter.com/ to make sure you're not exceeding 60 chars. PS: Please upvote this post, so we can help more makers.

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Aymen Loukil
Hey @ckpleiser Nice post! For Speetals (https://speetals.com/) i have this reworked version of it: "Web Performance monitoring tool that recovers lost $ and make users happy" What do you think? Thanks!
Carsten Pleiser
@loukilaymen I find make users happy a bit cliche. Maybe "Web performance monitoring tool to recover lost revenue"
Satyendra Sahani
For xperi.nz - a platform to get 3D/AR experience for e-commerce products. Sell more online, by having a 3D/AR version of your products
Satyendra Sahani
@bogomep It basically enhances the consumer experiences which ultimately leads to sale more. Check this out. https://jasoren.com/how-to-bring....
Satyendra Sahani
@bogomep did this make sense? I ll be glad to learn if you have different point of view.
Sam Kamrani
utopiops.com: "From code to production in seconds"
Kazi Rabbany
1. Mixio - a landing page builder to validate ideas fast (https://mixio.net) Tagline: "Validate your idea in a day, not months!" 2. LabSocial - a growth tool to build Twitter audience (https://labsocial.com) Tagline: "Watch your Twitter audience grow 🌱" Thanks for helping out :)
Carsten Pleiser
@ufocoder re: Mixio - I actually liked " A landing page builder to validate ideas fast" more :) LabSocial - I like your tagline.
Carsten Pleiser
For Paperless.io, I currently have the following tagline, but I'm not sure if it sticks: "Work faster and smarter with secure eSignatures 🚀" Alternatively, I have: "Create, edit, send, sign & automate business documents" Any feedback as to which one works better?
Aymen Loukil
@ckpleiser I like more "Work faster and smarter with secure eSignatures 🚀" And i would change it to "Faster, Safer and smarter eSignatures"
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