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Help picking our 1-liner
I'm launching Sleek on PH next week, and trying to pick our 1-liner.
Which is the best?
Votes / recommendations / edits encouraged! Thanks!
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Scott Kosmach
Shop brick-and-mortar with 1-click convenience
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Maybe something like "Checkout in 1 click - no matter where you shop."
But I think all of them explain what you're making pretty well. 😄
I find the first one much more impressive and to-the-point. Moreover, I will be happy to support you on the launch day. Just let me know when you are up to this.
@oscar_wehbe Thanks Oscar! We're not a cart aggregator, so I worry about that being a misconception, but otherwise its a cool twist
I liked the first one.
Been having this struggle recently too, I know what I want to use but struggling with the wording a little
A free social trading app where retail traders collaborate
A free social trading app where retail traders can collaborate
A free social trading app for retail traders to collaborate
A free social trading app for retail trader collaboration
A social trading app where retail traders collaborate (x3)
@richw thanks! Might be worth drafting some with slightly different language i.e. collaborate isn't the most clear action word, its a bit too resume-y for me. But I might not be the target you're conveying to
Buy it with one click.
- makes them click to find out how it works. Wow them with a good write-up.
1 click. Any store. Sleek Pay.
- written like an apple headline (hopefully it sells as well).
Good luck!
Thanks everyone who commented!!! Two winners have emerged, please reply to this comment for which is best:
1. Sleek Pay: Checkout from any store with 1 click
2. Sleek Pay: Amazon-like checkout with cashback, everywhere you shop