Roast my landing page, please
Svitlana Palamarchuk
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Working on the landing page.
What are your thoughts on its design, messaging, and overall user experience?
Do you understand the problem we are solving?
Is it clear that this is an extension?
Link - https://chargemyemail.com/?utm_source=ph&utm_medium=dis&utm_campaign=fd
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Dexter Awoyemi@dextersjab
Nack AI
All the information to get me hooked is in the header, which I like!
Single clear CTA at the beginning and end so I can always act on my impulse.
Can't fault the content and value communication.
I think you might be able to address could possibly add a hero image above the fold that shows the application in some meaningful way. That might address the feedback that @calli_fuchigami raised too.
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@dextersjab thank you for taking your time and providing me with feedback. Will 100% add that to backlog. Also, right now we're working on video content. how do you feel about adding step-by-step video guides to the website? Should we try that?
Nack AI
@svitlana_palamarchuk slack.com's landing page always comes to mind for me in terms of what I was suggesting. You have what looks like a good product but I'd be able to make my mind up faster if I saw what it could look like for me as a (reluctant) Outlook user. I haven't deep-dived into the usability enough to comment on guides I'm afraid!
Thinksy
It's clear, concise and fun to look at!
I really like your page. The only thing I see that doesn't quite make sense is the sub-heading:
"Outlook, but on steroids! Now enhanced with superior bulk sending and mail merge features for your outreach needs."
It doesn't necessarily describe the value to the customer, it says the features but since you explain those right below, and the "now enhanced" is more of an update. I think (and I've been told lol) the sub-heading should be like a tagline that synthesizes what is the value to the customer, what do they get from it.
Hope that helps!
@calli_fuchigami thank you so much for your feedback!
I will brainstorm another version of that, you are totally right
Really appreciate it 🫶