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@jdgusz Heyy, thanks for replying! 1. Perfect copywriting, but lack of a key visual in the first flow. Adding product demo or picture of people using the product would make a decent first glance for user. 2. Gradient colour on button is a bit extra. A normal use of high contrast colour is fine. Less is more. 3. Personal opinion but I feel like the purple colour can finetune a bit. Now a bit too saturated and too bright.

@ckpleiser Hey buddy your website is a winner. Everything is absolute class. One very minor opinion is placing the demo video as a popup instead of move to another tap might be better to keep ur users' feet on the same fantastic landing page. But anyhow, a 💯 landing. I don't need your product, but I fall in love with it already!

@tszhoi_19 Thanks for your kind words, mate! I'll follow your advice and will implement the pop up for the video to keep people on the same page.

@imanchev Actually not bad for this given context. Great layout and information architecture. 1. Could improve on font use (fontweight + size) (some too big some too small) 2. It is a bit too wordy 3. I'm not entirely familiar with crypto wallet so I found some wordings hard to understand. (See if you could try to talk like talking to a 5yr old) Good luck!!

@tszhoi_19 Thank you!

@primoz_erjavec viewing it on laptop. I would get rid of the hamburger button. Better to have the menu options visible. The buttons for the products you're selling is inconspicuous. Text over video is a little annyoing. Hope this helps!

@maen_haq thanks;)

@product_at_producthunt ❤️ the rotating catch phrases. Is the next 🦄 here?

@product_at_producthunt Oh god, I didn't expect this and I wouldn't dare to put comment on the Mighty PH. But there're some minor stuff I did notice. 1. The blue filter "featured" button is too eye-catchy (the only blue on the page and its sharp blue) Off-focus to user from project. 2. Love the borderless design, trendy and clean. I would make the upvote button pop when hover (colour change) instead of an orange overlay to encourage higher conversation on CTA:upvote. 3. The hidden open a new tab button next to project name is not quite intuitive. It feels like a share button turns out just open on new tab. A tool tip when over might works more seamlessly in this case. 4. Removed the ranking on the outside, also removing the competitive vibe among project. Good initiative but people might be quite sad if they're outside of 5th anw. 5. Rainbow colour skeleton loading, just lovely isn't it? Those are my little 2cents that doesn't even deserved. PH has been a great place for startup and builders! Thanks a lot for this!

@rashjbp pretty solid.

@price2spy Looking forward to the tool. I think one thing you can do differently is maybe highlight the benefits of bot protection on the top fold itself. Ofcourse you don't need that if most of the audience who land on your page are already well aware of it in which the focus can be on how your tool is the best out there

@price2spy you might need a more fancy design if you try to sell to small startup or B2C user. (Proper revamp needed) But if it works for B2B then it is not the first thing you need to do for the project!

@tszhoi_19 Thanks for the feedback! Actually got a couple of interesting changes in the works currently!

@archisman_das Thanks for your suggestion, I'll definitely consider it!

@jeet_bhanushali Congrats on ranking top on your launch! (Any tips? aha) 1. Very nice landing page with cool dark mode 2. Interactive component also easy try out is a winner 3. Key image could be more high-res, now a bit blurry 4. I found having CTA on every section a bit packed and distracted. (Esp the second flow with " Download High..." that section is a bit redundant) Would be great to go straight to the interactive drag effect. Overall very decent and looking forward to the creative profile element!

@dan__cleary Hey Dan, great landing page! However, I do find it not persuasive enough to sell your product! Understanding it is a product requires whole team effort (between founders, QA, tech, design). You should highlight how easy it can get onboard, or else I would think it is too annoying to setup stuff all over again. I think you could take a lot of reference from Linear's landing page. btw Great product, love it. Hope to hear more from you some day!

@tszhoi_19 Thanks so much for the feedback Lee, I really appreciate it. If you ever need any feedback or anything feel free to reach out!

@archisman_das 1. Love the tagline works well with the visual 2. I think fin-tech product can't be too design/ trendy. A great barrier of product like this is trustworthy. Try to take reference of bank might be better way to go than take reference from other B2C app. (pictures works well I think) Hope it helps! All the best.

@germa Looks awesome! Very clear, very straightforward, good strong CTA and great to use the Slack logo there. I got a slight UI bug (on chrome, laptop) - when I scroll about half way down the header switches to white.

@germa very neat landing page. I guess one thing that was bit unclear was Engage your crowd. It was not exactly evident what crowd meant.

Hey @germa ! Thanks for replying. 1. Overall a very nice landing page. 2. Also great feedback from Archisman about "crowd". Business owner/ don't seek their teammates as crowd I would say. 3. The key visual can be improved. Right now only the "survey" component makes senses to me. "Thank you" message doesn't explain a lot in this scenario. The circle graph is almost meaningless unless I scroll down to the data part. 4. Last one, quite personal from me but I would avoid using #000000 Black with other colourful graphic you are using. Try a bit light in black or pick another key colour for CTA button which could bend it nicely with yellow background. (notice your H1 colour is different from H2 tho haha) Thanks for letting me comment on it! Good work!!

@tszhoi_19 thanks for the feedback mate!

@jaskiran_kaur It is too packed with too many things to look at a glance. You would like people to focus on one point and read with a flow!

@joannakurylo your own landing is better than the ship one!! Nice use of colour. But the 1, 2, 3 steps order is wrong when it's in two columns. Put the CTA centre also helps conversion!

@tszhoi_19 Thank you for your feedback!! Do you think there's any added benefit to having a ship landing page and a main landing page? or should I just stick with mine that I originally built (BTW I built mine using Typedream )

Hey @mishra_mayank, thanks for replying. 1. Love the poppins idea, great use case. 2. Everything on the landing page is too big because it is not a responsive web(?), feel too overwhelming with all the big font and component. EVERYTHINGISTOOPACKEDLIKETHIS 3. Overall need to improve on information hierarchy and make better decision on layout, fontsize, fontweight. Learn how to use white space like @imtiyaz922 's https://curatora.io! Great work on the product for real, easy to understand, (Sad, Im a non-TA tho not using Slack anymore) Good luck!!!

@tmartchek HD image + Fontsize! Two important things you can do!

@tszhoi_19 thank you! I’ll get right on those!

@nik_hazell Hey! Thanks for replying. Overall a very decent landing page. Great display of video demo. Nice use of colour and contrast. Few points I would love to add on: 1. The Tagline is a bit plain, doesn't make a "Aha-ha" moment for user. Instead explain what are you in phase, you could try with what value you bringing to user or the actual use case. Such as "Test out your Ad video", "Predict how your ad will perform". Users are not investors, they don't get buzz word like AI-powered. 2. First sentence about "coming the first time" basically not useful for first time comer. It works for big brand when they have deep branding and community. Simply saying How it works (second sentence) is perfect. Less is more. 3. Overall quite wordy is some part. Used thin font to avoid the heaviness but still I skipped some parts because it is just too long. Hope this help! All the best.

@tszhoi_19 Thanks! Super helpful - will chat through with our team today :)

@keren_brickman heres a link to our app as well (we're free!) would love any copy feedback: app.gotolstoy.com

@keren_brickman Sorry I missed your comments! Hope it is not too late for this as well! Awesome Product, even more awesome landing page. It is almost perfectttt. I think animation is a bit too extra for those in the bottom of the page (cause people scroll faster and faster after first two flows) For content-wise, I struggle a bit to understand "face-to-face convo" when the demo video is a button-clicking interaction. For quite a sec, I was thinking so is this also video call as well (?) All the best to your work! Also great to see you hanging around in PH community!

@rupjyoti_nath i think its a bit to cluttered. Less is more. Too much text with very little separation. I would suggest adding separate pages for pricing etc. Focus on the main message on the main landing page.

@maen_haq Thank you.

@distartin It is clean and tidy! Simply wording, easy to understand! Great spacing!