Shortest version of your pitch. GO!

Scott Kosmach
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Ilya Uglianitsa
Reduce wrinkles and get more glowing and healthy skin. Not in Instagram, in real life Still working on it. Will reeeally appreciate the feedback. What do you think?
Scott Kosmach
@ilya_uglianitsa How about this for a start "Real glowing and healthy skin. No filters required." I think Glowing and Healthy suggest better looking skin, no need to mention wrinkles. But if you're looking to agitate peoples fear of wrinkles you could do this "Reduced wrinkles and glowing skin. No filters required.".
Ilya Uglianitsa
@skosmach oh, cool! Thanks, Scott! I'll present this to the team!
Rich Watson
NVSTly: Social Investing
NVSTly: Social Investing
profit from the best
Scott Kosmach
@richw This one was hard but I'll take a stab in the dark with "Profit Exemplified"
Rehan Choudhry
Remember them, forever.
Scott Kosmach
@rehan_choudhry1 You got me stumped, can't make it any shorter. 1 alternative: "Remember them always."
Stephanie Totty
Out-of-the-box data pipeline specifically for paid advertising.
Scott Kosmach
@stephanie_totty ok, ok. Let's see. How about "Instant data pipelines for advertising." or "data pipelines for advertising in a wink." or "1-click data pipelines for advertising."
Stephanie Totty
@skosmach ehhhh except not really? I like the word "instant" tho ...
Scott Kosmach
@stephanie_totty "Instant advertising data pipelines."
Will Veazey
Digital Technology Creative Director
Scott Kosmach
@abco_specialties "Director of Creative Technology" or "Creative Technology Director". I think the word Creative suggest digital so I axed it. For now anyway, that may change when people start building AI controlled Robot artist.
Will Veazey
Try it Before You Buy It at Click One to Get It!
Scott Kosmach
@abco_specialties Try before you buy - click to get!
Scott Kosmach
@abco_specialties Even shorter "Try before buy - click to get!" has a good 3 & 3 rhythm.
Erica Straub
Spriteley Voxcells
Spriteley Voxcells
Infinitely customizable avatars
Scott Kosmach
@ericamadly "Tailorable avatars" is all I got to shorten it. But you nailed it.
Erica Straub
Spriteley Voxcells
Spriteley Voxcells
@skosmach Yes!!! Thank you!
Maly Charbonneau
The first client portal 100% dedicated to your customers' experience. ā€¦ unpopular opinion maybe ?
Scott Kosmach
@maly_charbonneau not much fat to trim. But here's my shot "The first client portal dedicated to your customers' experience."
Scott Kosmach
Feedback made profitable.