Roast my landing page πŸ—

Frank Sondors
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We've launched https://www.salesforge.ai a few weeks back and I would appreciate it if you could give me candid feedback about the website.

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Good effort. Getting a professional designer to take a look at the site and make some changes would definitely help. 1. Landing page first section feels a bit cluttered 1. Icons - Standardize them - colors, size etc 2. Pricing plan - Use same box sizes You can hire a good designer on upwork or freelancer to do a design review :)
It looks great, tbh. Some thoughts though: 1) The sub-title in the hero section can be split into two lines for a better reading experience. Similarly, look into other content as well as I only skimmed the page. 2) Personalize at scale - not aligned with the other two sections. 3) Images can be worked out to give more context. 4) Not sure what the "supported" section means. If it's important, it can be brought up, probably right below the hero section as it features some renowned names.
Ankit Solanki
feels like a 4chan page to attract old people
I wanted to roast you but I don't have anything bad to say. I honestly love your landing page πŸ™ˆ
Shaur ul Asar
Hey@profy17 ! I took a look at your landing page, and here's my honest feedback: First of all, kudos on the sleek design and clean layout. The overall aesthetic is visually appealing and easy to navigate. The use of vibrant colors and high-quality images is attention-grabbing. One suggestion I have is to make the value proposition more prominent. Clearly communicate the unique benefits or solutions your product offers right at the top of the page. This will capture visitors' attention and quickly convey why they should choose your product.
Mukhil Maran
@profy17 The page looks neat and clean. Overall, may I know why you have set that font type? Is it aligned to your product UI? Because, generally, Roboto family font is used for websites. I especially loved the 'Request a feature' in Footer. These are minor things I found which may be useful for you: 1. The content and icon sizes of the section below the Hero section can be aligned equally 2. 'Protect your email deliverability' section's content has to be looked at. I think there is a few grammar mistakes. And, you can put the question first (which will increase the visitor's intention to know the answer for that question) and then your statement following that. 3. Not sure what the 'Supported by' section refers to. If it's customers part, you can place it right below the Hero section. It increases the credibility much more..
Frank Sondors
@mukhil_maran appreciate the feedback. I thought about using Roboto, but then everybody uses them, so decided to steer away and use another font to try and stand out. Do you think it looks odd or? Request a feature - yeah feel strongly about building a product based on user feedback from day zero! :) Appreciate the 3 main points for us to look into. Will work on that 😎
Parham Alimardanian
The website is nice, clean, and informative. It's good that you have included a testimonial. The only thing that catches my eye is the pricing page. I think it would be better if the two boxes were aligned vertically (I'm being too picky BTW)
Elissa Craig
What a way to get people to click!!! Love the animations at the top. Everything looks great! The only thing I would consider changing is removing line dividers and having one consistent background color (but that's also just a personal preference!)
Ekrem Γ‡etinkaya
I cannot understand if the "Frank" pop-up on the bottom right is fake or not. In both cases, why would the head-shot cut-off is not centered :) Jokes aside, it looks really nice overall.
The website really looks nice with the color contrast going on. Just one suggestion is to reduce your sub-title in the hero section; it is long, which is making it difficult to read!
Frank Sondors
@vaishali_rastogi thanks and I agree! Need to find a way to split it out nicely. Our problem is we're building something relatively complex, which does a few things. Will work on it next week πŸ™
Carl Brook
Looks pretty good to me! Couldn't say anything bad about that!
Frank Sondors
@carl_brook appreciate having a look at it, Carl! To be honest, when I look at it, I see no issues but I know there are critical things that need to be fixed and something that only others can spot.