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    Our elevator pitch - thoughts?

    Don Mallik
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    iStory transforms static marketing content into voice-interactive experiences with which customers can interact using their voice to obtain product-related information and recommendations, driving higher engagement and conversion rates, while gaining valuable audience insights for content creators.

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    Evan Lewis
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    Hi Stephen, love the elevator pitch! If I was going to picky, I'd say you could remove "with which customers can interact using their voice" to make the first half more concise. "iStory transforms static marketing content into voice-interactive experiences where customers can obtain product-related information and recommendations, driving higher engagement and conversion rates, while gaining valuable audience insights for content creators." But that's just my two cents.
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    Don Mallik
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    @evan_lewis iStory transforms existing marketing content into voice-interactive experiences with which customers can interact using their voice to obtain product-related information and recommendations, driving higher engagement and conversion rates, while gaining valuable audience insights for content creators.
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    Kate Kovbii
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    Hi there! Nice pitch!😊 You can also try to divide your phrase into a few smaller sentences. It would help your audience to follow the thought in the easiest way. And it will help you to talk it out loud to someone if needed without holding your breath😌
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