Landing page feedback needed πŸ‘€

Sveta Bay
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Hey πŸ‘‹ Yesterday I shipped a new home page. If you have a free minute, I'd appreciate your feedback on it ❀️ https://www.makerbox.club/

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SeΓ±or Humble
i think it's lovely. great job!
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Sebastian Janus - derStartupCFO
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Hey, Looks very good! Only one thing comes to my mind in order to optimize it: You could make the hero more scannable for the viewers eyes by shifting the Title to the left and giving it a F shape. Leaving some space for an illustration or image on the right. But apart from that it looks beautiful and has potential in converting very good
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@derstartupcfo Thank you for the feedback, Sebastian!
Felix
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Landing page roasting company asking for a landing page roast - nice one :D I like it some way but not fully. Actually nobody cares about so many reviews I'd say. And the "marketing feels like a torture" looks like a button but is none. Also, the product pages are quite text-heavy, I didn't have the urge to read that so I made a TL;DR scroll and then went back to main. Also, roasts are quite expensive from my POV. That's just a few random things I discovered in 2 minutes - in general, I like that it's clean and the colors are nice, too.
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Daniel
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Looking good! The image might be a bit cropped up and give your red boxes a bit of padding and maybe a round corner, like we do here: https://tolt.io/paddle-affiliate...
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@gjdaniel99 thank for sharing. good example!
Ritu Soni
Looks great! I like the overall vibe of the site! Would you mind checking out our no-code blogging platform landing page as well? https://bloghunch.com/ Its launching soon on product hunt
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@ritu_soni Thank you, Ritu! I have 3 comments: - I don't like animations, they load slowly - there're too many pricing plans - hard to choose - "featured in" YouTube and ProductHut don't sound like social proof cause everyone can be featured there But all other block are great! Enjoyed the style.
David Harris
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Anoir Houmou
Looks great! The only feedback I have is that the content could be presented in a smaller format so it takes up less space.
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Hi:), checked for broken links, you have 1 broken image:) https://issuedetector.com/?domai...
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@deimosfobos oh wow, thank you!
Hidayt Rahman
Looks great! I only can see some minor spacing and padding issue. Also at the top section `explore products` button is not much focused due to the massive box around it
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@hidaytrahman thank you!
Moeky
I like it - looks really nice. I think some of the language can be simplified and the call to action made clearer and earlier but looks good to me 😎
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@moeky Thank you!
Jason Jia
I recently visited your website and wanted to share my thoughts with you. Firstly, I think the design of your website is very stylish and visually appealing. It is clear that a lot of thought and effort has gone into the layout and overall aesthetic of the site. One thing I noticed, however, is that I somehow overlooked the main action that I should be doing on the website. I think it would be helpful if this was more prominently featured on the homepage to make it easier for visitors to understand the main purpose of the website and what they should be doing next. Also, I noticed that there is a lot of information on the website, It can be overwhelming for the visitors. You may want to feature one of your services more prominently on the homepage so that visitors can understand more quickly what your business is all about. Overall, I think your website is great, and I look forward to seeing it grow and improve in the future.
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@sijie_jia Really good points. Thanks a lot for the feedback, appreciate it!
Christine Pham
it would be great if has more effects
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@christinepham What do you mean by effects? πŸ‘€
hafid Ahlaqach
Hello! i need all the feedback i can get! www.bobafeel.com
Reece Charsville
Hi, Love the colour scheme! One thing I would say is that on mobile, the reviews section becomes quite a lot to scroll. Would love any feedback on our site too: https://forward.digital