Can you roast my landing page?
Charlie Kor
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Could you provide feedback on my landing page?
Design, words, understanding, and everything else
I'm open to any words!
Here is the link!
https://www.hummin.io/
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Bradley Adkins@brad_kins
Roasti
I took a look at your website and left 10 comments on markup to provide some suggestions for improvement on your design, courtesy of designfly.io - you can find them here: https://app.markup.io/invite/acc...
I hope you'll find my feedback helpful!
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HyperTest
Minimal design works in your favor! ✌️
Just one suggestion: the images with your comments on them look a bit too much to look at and understand in one go!
Momentum Page
Super minimal, but looks cool!
Nice design. One thing: try resizing you youtube video section so that it will be more responsive on mobile devices
1. If you want to increase conversion, have a popup with a lead magnet
2. Instead of having product hunt and sign up for the beta as 2 clickable elements. Condense and have 1 call to action only above the fold.
3. Add a title and subtext before or after the video so that I know why I should click to watch or what the video is about.
4. I don't 100% understand the "Follow with a single click"? What am I following, why is it different than just following on twitter? Your number 1 value prop should be the first thing you list.
5. I'd suggest putting your "How it works" section, as the first section. I'd also spend a little more time making it more designed and visual. The main feedback so far is I don't know exactly what you guys do.
6. Add socials if applicable